Ends and Beginnings no stopping till the end of the line, said the driver worry was asking for the worst at that point, so we dropped all that, slid down the window and noticed a sharp green smell from the rim of hills: anticipation of Spring spoken to the air and the bus was a dagger, slipped through the heart of a long-lost town, the grey plywood window-fronts now peeling by themselves, without a new dress of roller paint and finally, the bus stopped by the sea, and we marched down to the pebbles together, past the rotting cranes and flapping warehouse panels, and we dipped our hands in the sea, and we licked the salt water, clean with abandonment, and it spoke of beginnings for the first time in a while
Monday, September 9, 2013
From Grey Beret: Ends and Beginnings
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like this one even if it is more narrative.
Yeah..some image variability
and simile freshness. Cause it's
not my past.
It was pinhole-proximity generated,
but it developed a semi-coherent
back plot. I like the
post-industrial as Eden thought
that popped in out of nowhere..
weirdly hopeful.
I need to do the
selection-starter-culture more;
it breaks me outside my themes and
language a bit. It's tiring, but
it's exploring. It also takes
a few weeks away-time to figure out
how to trim the trite spots.
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