Sunday, October 27, 2013

maybe you haven't seen leaves do this

A Place

she said 
she knew
a place where she 
could make 
stars dance
on fallen leaves

i said
i knew
she might
be fooling
but when she took me there
there they were
...dancing

or did 
they dance
just for us

could no one else see

2 comments:

Pearl said...

aw, romantic softie.

Jim K. said...

i was going for 'magic' but it
swerved that way..

the images of light dots moved
but the leaf didn't...it took me
a while to figure out how that happens

'jumping fleas' would be more
accurate but less charming...heh