Sunday, October 27, 2013

maybe you haven't seen leaves do this

A Place

she said 
she knew
a place where she 
could make 
stars dance
on fallen leaves

i said
i knew
she might
be fooling
but when she took me there
there they were

or did 
they dance
just for us

could no one else see


Pearl said...

aw, romantic softie.

Jim K. said...

i was going for 'magic' but it
swerved that way..

the images of light dots moved
but the leaf didn' took me
a while to figure out how that happens

'jumping fleas' would be more
accurate but less charming...heh